Sunday, May 28, 2006

deadly free write

(this one is really not complete at all.. just something i had in mind)

One police officer shook his head. "It's a shame really, she was in love."

"Or obsessive," His partner replied.

They stood over the body of a 21 year old woman. Her legs As camera flashes captured her final resting place, Officer Neil Croady noticed how her skin matched the innocent white of the chalk outline.

"I wouldn't call this suicide, Kev. Look at her legs. What position would she have to be in to get them tangled like that. See how the left one is bent, and under the right?"

"Call it what you will Neil, but we have a job to do," Officer


The note from her night table was not the only one found in her apartment. Perhaps she was an aspiring writer, but these are what teachers call 'free writes'."


your hands, their position, anywhere you want to be. come be with me , here in my arms. how acan someone be so far away, yet so close to my heart? when ever we're together, i feel like you understand whthe way no one else has. what could have brought this feeling to my mind? i've never known anything like this begore.