well, my writing workshop teacher was impressed with the second draft of my satire. the first draft was edited by the students, and the woman that had mine totally marked it up. I hope the teacher didn't have a problem reading it....
she commented that the description of the process was a good addition and i should include more information about why gelatin is harmful.
hee hee i feel like the young girl from a studio ghibli movie. now i have to do the research to make my story believable. it's kind of exciting.
well spring break is here and i have lots of work to catch up on.
~wyn
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